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Melody's Magic Troubles - Prologue
Fantasy story, Melody is a mage with a special condition, affecting her whenever she casts a spell.
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 Swagster
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5 
This story is absolutely bangin. What triggers the expansion is a big part of any story, and this one is really cool. The cost of spell casting can lead to some very nice inconvenient breast scenes. I hope you continue your craft
 YordyScore
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5 
Ok, you've hooked me. A very nice start that has me wanting Ch.1 now, please. 

What, you mean I have to wait? Unbelievable!
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