Fun little short story with BE induced by a self-fulfilling bra. Jessica should be more careful about what she buys without trying it on first. (BE,LAC, Hucow, Subliminal Message)
Average Scores:
- Overall: 3.50
- BE: 3.50
- Characters: 3.50
- Technical: 2.50
BunnysDead
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 2
Great start to hopefully a series? Great first story keep it up!
Grammar is a bit rough, the antagonists name changed from Jessica to Abby and then back, which was a distraction.
The BE descriptions were terse and could use some more time to describe the process.
Some Guy
Overall= 3, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 3
Pretty hot little story, thanks! For me would be hotter if she got to enjoy her boobs with someone else
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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