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The Overflowing Bra

Madam Materia
The Matter of Heirs
Welcome to Madam Materia's Magical Menagerie. Queen Lidia Severina, sovereign of her nation, has found herself without husband or heir. Quite by choice, for the secret her heart will open only for a woman has been held close to her chest. Perhaps this mysterious Menagerie holds the key to give her that which she craves, and needs for her people: the love of a woman, and an heir to succeed her.
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Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Fantastic story, I love a good love story with female muscle growth mixed in!
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Great work as always! Keep it up!
Overall= 3, BE= 2, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
More of an erotic novel than BE focused smut. Well written though.
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