Greetings dearest reader. I'm a new author to TOB but have been a hobby writer for some time. Submitted for your digestion is a 25k word tale of Breast Expansion and Bimbofication that I pray will delight you.
A fancy new bakery has opened in the small college town of New Billington. When stressed out Pageant Mom; Candice walks through the shop's doors, she doesn't know that what she is purchasing are more than just innocent pastries.
A tale of naughty MILF Bimbofication where a high-strung woman learns to really let her hair down and have a little dirty fun.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.67
- BE: 4.50
- Characters: 4.50
- Technical: 4.67
Nonous
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Well done, just enough detail to describe, but enough suggested at to be evocative.
DocErotique
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Arguably the best story I have ever read on this site. No bull. I couldn't stop myself from finishing it. It was less about getting off than just being compelled by the story. I absolutely loved it!
MDX25
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Welcome! Great to see new talent on the site! Keep up the good work!
Some Guy
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Great story! Thanks. A bit more detail on the BE would be great, maybe some BE scenes
Platy
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
A Story. I love the people who try and make an effort! I hope we see more from you.
HMMMM
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
I sure hope this isn't Madam Materia all over again
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