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The Overflowing Bra

Twisted Infinite
Adonis
The body of a living god turns out to be a lot more of a burden than one man was prepared for.
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Kowlaski
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Great story, wellwritten, and on point. It whooshed by in a hurry though, lots of sexy facts and factors dished out over the course of a series of quick scenes. I could easily see you delving into the lives of these people. The original bimbo wiferesearcher is referred to in summary it would be great to flesh out ha that whole part of the story in greater detail. Great descriptions of the physicality and the physics and even greater attention to his brain and its failings under the influence of the Adonis bots. As some have commented, the device of instant nanobot transformations felt a bit rushed and skimpy, but you more than make up for it with the all the ramifications and unforeseen problems. 
MDX25
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Love your work! A great story as always! Keep up the good work!
MDX25
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Love your work! A great story as always! Keep up the good work!
SW
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Hot as fuck and well written. Plenty of breast, muscle and cock growth for my bisexual self, cheers. 
Roid Abuser
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
This was fricking fantastic.  Don't know why others are saying there is no breast growth.  He inflates 8 or so girls, repeatedly.

It's hard to stories with male muscle growth that aren't homosexual andor really mainly FMG stories where the woman ends up dominating the man.

And on top of that, clever with a dark hint.

I'd love another chapter.  Perhaps he gets some control.  A Professor Adonis version, to use a Hulk reference.  Still obsessed, but controlled.  Some events when he's out in the wild, like being kidnapped by bimbofied women who also have gotten some control, but not complete.

Stories about him in the workplace, or school.  Treated both badly and well.  Etc!
aitchbee
Overall= 4, BE= 2, Characters= 4, Technical= 3
Bubs, I agree with you  but few people in this country understand the laws of conservation of matter and energy.
Bubs
Overall= 2, BE= 2, Characters= 2, Technical= 4
Like the others said, not enough focus on breast expansion for a site about breast expansion. Also, if you're going to use a scifi convention like nanobots, I find a character instantly gaining hundreds of pounds out of thin air inconsistent. 
Aethiop
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
This was a great setup, but frankly, we are all here to read about tits growing bigger, and we don't really see much of that. Don't let us down.  
Torque
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Could have used a little more BE, but everything else was top notch, as expected from you! A part 2 where more of the hidden commands are found would be excellent, maybe with some futa, longer lasting BE, or other inflation fetishes.
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