This was a fulfilled request for Parablock on DA! A quick romp about coming up short in the face of stacked odds.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 3.33
- BE: 4.00
- Characters: 3.00
- Technical: 3.67
Nah dude
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
Couple of typos and some other grammatical errors. Weird subject matter. Orcs And halflings and whatnot is weird definitely far out their fantasy.
Sisiguru
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 3, Technical= 5
Fantasy race transformations aren't my favorite, but I thought this was really well done you don't see a lot of short stack tfs out there. If anything the previous comment is just crappy feedback and not helpful to any of the authors who may want to post here.
dontno
Overall= 2, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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