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The Overflowing Bra

SpartacusDA
Claire’s Testing
Four-part story of a girl named Claire whose stomach is in her breasts, and the scientists who take her to their lab to "run tests" on her.


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 Toymaker
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5 
Short and to the point, though there were a few things left unanswered did the scientists ever actually figure out how to replicate her growth?, but I enjoyed watching Claire revel in her unfettered greed and the resulting growth.
 nice
Overall= 3, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 3 
Very nice. Best story this year!
 cman
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5 
Now that is some serious growth.  Great story!
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