An aquarium worker has an unfortunate encounter with a blowfish and finds she can't handle stress quite the same after.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 3.13
- BE: 3.25
- Characters: 3.13
- Technical: 3.13
Anonymous
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
Maybe verify your uploads next time...
WrongFile
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
This is not part 2, try again
heliumgirl
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Part 1 is part 1.
Part 2 is also part 1.
Might want to look into that.
PuffedOff
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
Since this is labeled part 2 and there is no part 2 I have to give this all 1s. Fix your upload and will revise the score on the actual story.
A dude
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
When I downloaded it it is labeled as part two but when you open the file it is part one
Cheps
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
Part one is cool, but you didn't include part 2.
cumm
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
It is a phenomenal story, really good I liked the mbeginning but it seven getting better, rallay enjoyable please more!
anonymous
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
A fun read overall, but Part 2 seems to be just a duplicate of Part 1. That's the only reason I'm giving it a 4 out of 5.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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