Jillian and Abby could be described as two fairly normal British college girls. They were different in many respects, but also inseparable. Accordingly, when Jillian left her friend behind for an exchange year in Wuhan, China, Abby could not wait to see her again. So she paid Jillian a visit, days before her return home. On the last day of their joint stay abroad, accompanied by Jillian's host sister Janet, a shopping tour would end with a strange incident that may or may not have unprecedented consequences down the line...
Note: no explicit BE in this story yet, mainly establishing the setting
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.50
- BE: 4.00
- Characters: 4.75
- Technical: 4.50
setup
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
very good set up. Jillian will happily carry all the boob from the insecure girls, she has the personality that a big breasted sexy woman needs. Her narcissism is also very sexy.
WisePanzer9
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Nice premise for the story, hoping to read a longer chapter next time!
primus42
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Decent story, fantastic render!
serenmo
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Really emjoyed this one! It'm not to sure if theres a golden thread as its a bit all over the place at times, but I'm looking forward to the sequels.
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