A bass-boosted party gives little Yuna the chance to live out her biggest dreams!
Average Scores:
- Overall: 5.00
- BE: 4.00
- Characters: 3.00
- Technical: 5.00
Alyzero
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 5
I really liked it, I just wished it and all of your stories were longer. The jump in cup sizes was a little jarring, I think if you take your time describing the overall BE scene your work can really shine. Many writers here have the opposite problem where they do a ton of exposition before getting to relatively short BE scenes, so there's a happy medium somewhere. I'm looking forward to sequels!
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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