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An ordinary college student is suddenly thrust into the life of a different, bustier version of herself. Will she be able to gain control of her dimension spanning powers or will she give in to her base desires?
Average Scores:
- Overall: 3.83
- BE: 4.17
- Characters: 3.33
- Technical: 4.17
Aethiop
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
A great start. Loved the way this progressed, and how the protagonist seemed to be controlled by her own desires. The milking parlour was a fantastic visualisation of a classic trope, and could have gone so much further. As it turned out, the last iteration was a bit feeble. Sorry it all petered out too soon.
Disappointed
Overall= 2, BE= 4, Characters= 2, Technical= 3
Loved first half of your story when her body was built for sex, F cup with puffy lips. The fact she wanted to be even bigger was hot as hell. I secretely hoped she would choose a reality where she would be more of a tit queen growing slightly bigger and sluttier every time. However, after that it went downhill she turned into a literal cow that could not walk anybody finds this sexy?, also some awkward guy showed up in the story. Wtf?
I would have loved if she actually enjoyed being very busty and very sexy compared to others but not literal cow made for milking with some weird guy milking her.
Disappointed
Overall= 2, BE= 4, Characters= 2, Technical= 3
Loved first half of your story when her body was built for sex, F cup with puffy lips. The fact she wanted to be even bigger was hot as hell. I secretely hoped she would choose a reality where she would be more of a tit queen growing slightly bigger and sluttier every time. However, after that it went downhill she turned into a literal cow that could not walk anybody finds this sexy?, also some awkward guy showed up in the story. Wtf?
I would have loved if she actually enjoyed being very busty and very sexy compared to others but not literal cow made for milking with some weird guy milking her.
Sincerity
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Enjoyed this quite a bit! Haven't seen a story on this site that has been my thing in awhile, but I like some of the orientation play at the start, I like to see more WLW stories here!
Also like the size and awkwardness of some of the changes, liked those sizes. I immediately looked for more stories from you and was sad to see this was your only one!
anon
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Interesting and sexy, but I don't fully understand the relationship between Tupaso, the drifting, and the machine. I think you played it a little too coy with that one.
RR
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
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