An ordinary college student is suddenly thrust into the life of different, bustier version of herself. Will she be able to gain control her dimension spanning powers or will she give in to her base desires? [First Person Narrative]
Average Scores:
- Overall: 3.00
- BE: 3.00
- Characters: 3.00
- Technical: 3.00
OnlyGold
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
I'm interested in the premise and what is here, but the story is only 5 pages long? Seems like it ends very abruptly. Is there more to this story that didnt get uploaded?
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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