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Bethany finds a strange app on her phone, and the usual hijinks ensue!
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.67
- BE: 4.33
- Characters: 3.50
- Technical: 4.33
Doobya
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 5
Returning after reading this a while ago, really liked the story, hopefully even after all this time there's a sequel.
Total ally
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
VERY good but needs a sequel. We didn't get too see the affects of all the options.
flies
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
good old fashioned master PC story. excellent work.
Daichi
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 2
Only issue was the numbered list that started to occur about 13 of the way through kinda broke the flow of the writing
wildcards
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
This was a very pleasant read and open for a follow up.
Aethiop
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 2, Technical= 5
A great scenario, well explored. I enjoyed the puzzles and the solutions. Nice job.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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