What would you do if you gained the power to rewrite reality at a whim? (from the author formerly known as The Light Fantastic)
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.36
- BE: 4.64
- Characters: 4.55
- Technical: 4.55
FakeNameNotReal
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
From a longtime fan who is trans herself congratulations! Great to see you writing again, could not be happier for you!
intangir
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
An awesome sampling of a variety of extreme size transformations described in loving detail and immediacy, undertaken with characters whose evolutions are taken to a conclusion oft presaged but rarely realized. A!
Not great
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
Flamewrks
Overall= 3, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Somewhat fun, but the paper thin plot and cluttered scene descriptions let it down unfortunately.
aylamb
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Wow. This was quite the odyssey, it may be the longest single story I've read from this site multi chapter work excluded, but I did finish it.
First things first, congratulations to Twisted Infinite.
Next, a long story deserves a meaty review, tldr at the bottom Reality warper stories tend to not be my cup of tea, usually because they tend to devolve into madwithpower character arcs, or karmic irony, or surprising amounts of repetition in setpieces or transformations. This story blew my expectations out of the water with its exponential escalation and conclusion. Full points for style, writing, and composition.
The central characters were well defined, and the flow of their likeability and traits are part of the story's progression. The lead has the least going on, ultimately, but in this genre having a cipher is a good thing to me.
Full marks for BE and change descriptions. The only critique here is that like with many reality warp stories it can get hard to keep track of who's got what. This is especially true when core cast start getting additional transformations and in a story so long.
45 for overall enjoyment. Truly this is the wish fulfillmentreality warping gold standard. This is both a good thing and bad thing
This story probably has something for everyone, but if you can find it, you can't count on it sticking around again outside of a few TF's that are persistent within the massive length. There's very little plot, which isn't to say there isn't a story, it feels like the epic logical conclusion of the genre, but if you're looking for a sweeping narrative with tension and conflict and action besides fucking this isn't that. Instead this is the ultimate candy shop for TF fetishes. Lots and lots of well written sex vignettes to sample, amusing characters and repetitions, low stakes.
I consider it a high compliment that I won't forget this read and will return to my favorite sections should the mood strike.
The sheer amount going on may be overwhelming and excessive to some readers haha readercharacter resonance!, but if you have some free time and want some vivid fuckery this is worth diving in to.
Soylent Orange
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Absurdly good story of a fetish smorgasbord. At times cute, at times tender, at times even scary, it is always sexy. I'd consider it one of the site's seminal must reads.
eggirl
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Even if the content isn't necessarily your thing, tf aficionados should study the work of writers like Twisted and Mich just to understand how to structure and write erotic epics. Thankfully I love the content, what a great read . Also, LMAO to that ReadMe. Your work helped wake me up to my own gender journey in...2014? Maybe 15? Whenever Wish Upon A Star came out. Glad to hear you're headed in a new and exciting direction, and sending all the best.
Soliloquy
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
An epiclength cavalcade of transformative, smutty futa goodness. If you've read the older Light Fantastic stuff, you should have a fairly good idea what you're in for. Reality change stuff pushes my buttons, and this executes very well.
Corbin Dallas
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
One of the best stories from one of the best TGTF writers of all time.
Beren
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Goddamn. This was just... goddamn. I don't even know what to say. Your writing was hot before, but this is a whole new level.
Catfish
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Forget defunding the police, I think we should all work towards transforming the police into the Mobile Sexual Release Patrol.
Another excellent epic by this author! Among other things, I'm not normally a futa fan, but they have a way of describing it that makes it sound very appealing. Glad to see the positive update included in the README file.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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