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The Overflowing Bra

Aethiop
Research & Development, part two
Part two of a two-part story. 

With her "More Me" serum, scientist Emma Wallace has made a big and expanding impact on the lives - and bustlines - of millions of women. But when a gorgeous blond journalist with huge boobs looks like she might be about to spoil everything, Emma comes up with an audacious plan to use this rapidly-growing problem to her advantage. Set in the Galactea Inc. universe.
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mujahadeen
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
Great story. Should continue it with a spinoff of the maincharacters' own addiction.
AREA
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
Mediocre. The expansion of the blond journalist was formulaic and pretty uninteresting. Little present to spice up a bland tail of growth addiction. 
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