A nude swim in the ocean, interrupted.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 1.00
- BE: 1.00
- Characters: 2.00
- Technical: 3.00
Mrmanandu
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 2, Technical= 3
Boy what a mess. So, part 1 of the story contains nothing but setup. A woman, upset with her boyfriend decides to take a cheeky naked swim. She then gets fucked while swimming by shadow men.
Part 2 starts her on the beach, where she chooses to go after the men and..yeah she gets fucked by shadow men... alot... like it goes for more than half the second part. Then she wakes up in a hospital, you get one line of dialog about becoming more pregnant and then she gives birth. Just a waste of time.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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