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The Overflowing Bra

Harmless Wishes Between Friends
Blake wakes up with the ability to change people with his wishes.
Average Scores:

Overall= 3, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 5
The breast expansion is really kind of a minor point. The real point seems to be that beign a dick who doesn't care about others consent is ok, which makes this a hard read to get through.
Overall= 2, BE= 2, Characters= 2, Technical= 4
Technically well written, but there was no substance to the characters, weak on the breast growth, and was just a very generic MC story.
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Perfect technical, ending was a bit of a miss. Would have loved to see a bit more in the accidentalunintended path to match the spirit material.
Overall= 4, BE= 2, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Pretty good overall. Definitely in the MrGrey spirit, although I would have liked to see a more even split between wishes that resulted in mental changes and wishes that resulted in physical transformations  and the final always been a slut wish seemed like a bit of a letdown, with a lot more changes that could have occurred from that.
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