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A shy girl gets the unique oportunity to work side by side with her high school's crush. But what possibilities she has to catch his attention when he is surrounded by hot women. Fortunately a strange woman has what she needs to boost her confidence.
My native language isn't english, so apologies for the grammar and spelling errors in the story
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.50
- BE: 4.50
- Characters: 4.50
- Technical: 4.50
Amazing
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Absolutely loved your story, the attribute theft was amazing, the character development as well. Personally I would have loved an alternative ending where her character turns bad, turns nymphomaniac and abuses her power. Similarly to your Size Adjustment story which I absolutely loved, only thing missing for me is the slutification of the main character or some point where she abuses her power and slowly goes down the wrong path.
In short I wish some of your stories would end bad, not always in a fairy tale ending.
Thanks for amazing story.
burningfield
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I have been your fan over dacades since yahoo group.
I think this is nice trial in th light of attribute theft story. I wish you can keep going.
I want to see your stories what can go further beyound human like giantess
Holy shit
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I loved the story so much. Stuff like this and HikerAngels are the best. Write more!!
Bepis
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
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