A high school boy needs to sneak into the girls locker room while the girls are in the pool... to get his phone back, not for anything else. Little does he know he's being set up by his crush, for an intense transformation! This is my first story, with more (hopefully) to come! The previous upload was in a file type that people were having trouble opening, so this time it's a .rtf. If there are any more problems let me know, sorry!
Average Scores:
- Overall: 5.00
- BE: 5.00
- Characters: 5.00
- Technical: 5.00
Bad Irving
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
A all around. So very well written. Hoping to see more soon. THANK YOU for fixing what the issue was, I had wanted to read this and now I can.
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Bad Irving
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