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My lastest story dealing with a wife whose husband retired from adult movies after getting married. Unfortunately his co-stars wanted him back and send him their bras to lurk him in. Being severaly outclassed by women bustier than her, our lovely wife used the help of her friend and a magic bra to own the competition in an spectacular way.
My native language isn't english, so apologies for the grammar and spelling errors in the story
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.67
- BE: 4.33
- Characters: 4.00
- Technical: 3.67
Reader
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
This was a great story! Please keep it up. Id love to read more of your stories.
wildcard
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 3
A rather similar breast growth setup like your Valentines Gift story, an equally enjoyable read, grammar felt much better.
Looking forward to read more of your stories.
Kreos
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 3
Great story, very focused on the BE without unnecessary faff. Kind of sad that there was no payoff with her Witch friend though
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