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An old story of mine featuring a wife stealing the breast size of three mean women as a present for her husband to celebrate Valentine's Day.
My native language isn't english, so apologies for the grammar and spelling errors present in the story
Average Scores:
- Overall: 5.00
- BE: 2.00
- Characters: 4.00
- Technical: 2.00
wildcard
Overall= 5, BE= 2, Characters= 4, Technical= 2
I rather enjoyed this story for its simplicity and through what means the growth was achieved, its something rather new making this an unique story for me.
As pointed out, English isn't your native language it was noticeable, but still good enough to not be too much of a distraction or hinderance.
The BE description felt a bit lust lacking, mostly because it was a slow growth, but overal enjoyable.
Keep up the writing
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