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The Overflowing Bra

Madam Materia
The Milkmage
A Madam Materia commission. In a world where milk fuels magic, there are a gifted few who stand head and shoulders above their piers: milkmages. Follow the beginnings of a gifted novice's adventure, as she goes about her pilgrimage and winds up at her first stop. A quaint little inn called "The Leaky Teat" where she'll learn the name isn't just a coincidence of its proximity to the university.
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ThatNewShoeSmell
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Much more lighthearted than Materia's usual fare. I enjoyed the more mild premise written with the topnotch quality that makes this writer's works so good. I'm also a sucker for milky mages. 
Good all around!
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