Katie takes a mysterious drug to improve her plain figure.
NOTE: features very, VERY extreme growth and body modifications; reader discretion advised.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 3.86
- BE: 3.86
- Characters: 3.29
- Technical: 3.86
SoylentOrange
Overall= 1, BE= 2, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
I smell sockpuppets, because there's no way this story deserves the high scores it's getting. Amateur at best, if compared to the rest of the work on this site. To the author If you're still in school, please take a composition or writing 101 class. If you're out of school... you need a LOT of practice.
Antares
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Absolutely fantastic, a definite great first story if I've ever seen one. Just one thing, it seems like no messages can be sent to your twitter account. Any other way to send a message your way, like a Discord handle?
LOABW
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Fantastic! Weird in all the ways I love. Would absolutely love to see you do more along these lines, or even moreso!
Jason
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Nice start. Hope to see more work from you soon.
chronostatic
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
To rehzeh I should have! My twitter account is AlabasterWhite if you want to fire a message off my way, and to anyone else that sees this!
Blorp
Overall= 3, BE= 4, Characters= 2, Technical= 3
rehzeh
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
100 the best story on here in some time. Only wish there was more! and that you left contact details somewhere so i could talk about our mutual interests
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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