The envious Kayleigh and her physics class become the second victims of the powerful Amphora of Eros.
(Not sure what happened with the upload last time. Should be readable now)
Average Scores:
- Overall: 5.00
- BE: 4.50
- Characters: 5.00
- Technical: 5.00
Dalton
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Great work! A major improvement! I loved the first breast expansion scene. The swell descriptions were well draw out for the main character. I would have wanted to read the detail about the other characters individual changes. The progressive growth and the overwhelming orgasms were a nice touch. Keep it up.
Really Good
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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