The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Aurelian
Lessons - Lesson 1: History
No one is safe once Ricky accidentally unleashes an ancient power upon his senior class. Everyone will quickly "learn" the consequences.

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 Good stuff
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5 
Really good! I found myself wishing you had spent a little longer describing the transformations, but overall a great entry. 
 MrEcks
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5 
good good good
keep it up!
 Catfish
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 3 
Some fun and sexy transformations here. Looking forward to future installments to see how students in other classes get transformed.
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