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The Overflowing Bra

Fidget
Bimbo Potion: Revenge, Ch. 06
Amy is tired of being pushed around by the girls at work, so she decides to get even with the help of a bimbo potion she finds on the internet.
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 Anonymous
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5 
Incredible!  Love your writing!  Can't wait for the next chapter!
 Anonymous
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5 
Hell yes you nailed the landing with one of the hottest bits of writing I've read in a long time. 
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