A Madam Materia Commission. Welcome to Madam Materia's Magical Menagerie. My poor Alice, so hurt by this foul man's rejection, too blind to see what he has right in front of him. Perhaps a bit of the Madam's signature is necessary to help him realize the gifts he has? Or that his selfish desires have consequences he may be too naïve to see.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.50
- BE: 4.75
- Characters: 4.75
- Technical: 4.25
flies
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Awesome work. Probably the first time I've read erotic fiction and actually wanted to find out what was going to happen next rather than simply waiting to get to the good part.
Lots of BE, lots of sex, lots to love. The very end confused me as I don't recall what incident they're referring to, but anyway, awesome stuff.
Leviathan
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 2
Almost a great story. Plot and mechanical details are the only thing holding it back.
kronk12144
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I feel like I lack context and the harem aspect was pretty much ignored. Still a good story though
The Fisk
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I really enjoyed this. It really felt like Ryan's life was happening to him.
I got confused on Alice though. Was this in another story that I somehow missed?
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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