Cindy cannot just let a challenge slide by, even if it means ending the world. Matt cannot stop his aunt now, especially when reality seems to bend to her whim. This is a simple one, just like most of my other pieces.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 3.20
- BE: 3.20
- Characters: 4.00
- Technical: 4.20
OM NOM NOM
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
This was fun. I feel like it could've been a little bit longer maybe more detail on her trying different methods and the effects of those, but it was still a fun read. I also liked that she was never cruel or nasty about her godlike power. That's a nice change from the norm.
flies
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Like he said, More goofy than sexy, but still a fun read.
Anon
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
More goofy than sexy, but still a fun read.
hans gruber
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
BEnjoyer
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Fantastic! Love the kind of slow growth at the start. Fun how it got out of control by the end.
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