The Overflowing Bra

Right up my alley. Truly enjoyable. I will be reading your stories. Terrific. Thank you. 

I feel like we missed out on a lot of opportunity to see some crazy shit with the perspective always focused on Alex while Sofia goes off and has fun with the pills without him for most of the trip.

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But even that can be forgiven. What upset me the most was that ending. I had actually grown to really like those characters, and while Alex stayed pretty consistent, I very much hated the weird heel turn that Sofia made at the end. It probably wasn't meant to seem like a heel turn, but what she did was sick and demented. She literally solved the guy's problems by erasing him from existence. That's fucked up, bro.

In a strange way I loved it... only I didn't.

And this second part is what's actually on my mind right now. It was a rollercoaster, just like it was for the guy. I felt all those past feelings of anger, jealousy, sadness and emptiness hook me because I have felt similar things. And I was hoping that since this is a fantasy story, it would finally turn out to be good, and happy in the end.
But then it was stomped into the ground and disappeared down a dirty toilet. The ending sucked. Not in writing, not in grammar. But in logic, and in overall redemption for the main guy.

Spoilers ahead
If there were at least a bit more descriptive scenes of growth, of them actually having fun towards then end and describing her growth, changing to his fantasies every round or so, something to have me go Okay I can return to this story for this scene, because it was just too good. Sure the ending sucked big time, but this scene is just bringing me back, for that short bit... But no. It was a downward spiral with no real upwards redemption in it.
Hoping for a better ending next time, cause this story won't be saved in my collection.

Great story, but the ending really just crushed me. I also agree that it was a buzzkill, it just left me depressed. All of your other work is great, so keep writing, just try to have them be a bit for on the light side, in the sense of how the reader feels at the end.

Very good, but man is the protagonist an idiot, or just has precisely the wrong level of morality to get what he wants. 

I enjoyed the story until the end, where our protagonist was murdered by someone who supposedly cared about them greatly and really appreciated the gift given to them. I don't understand how selfishness would result in her premeditating the result she got because what she got wasn't a surprise to her, especially since she could have easily figured out how to get the result she wanted without killing someone e.g. I wish you looked like me, had my memories in addition to your own, and love my fiance as much as I do. I don't understand the logic, nor the author's choice, beyond it being contrived to get an emotional reaction or to surprise the reader.

Another solid reality change story from wokod, exploring some growth and expansion themes from a different viewpoint than usual. I agree that the ending was sad and hit hard, which isn't what I look for in an expansion story.

I appreciate the upfront disclaimer about English, but with only a handful of errors. 
This made me sad, which is a testament to how you make your characters. However if you ask me if I enjoyed this, I didn't. This made me pretty damn sad. I dont care how I look saying this, but this made me think about how I'm an even bigger loser than Alex is, and I don't come to this site for the truth. 
Please keep writing. I love your stuff.

The sad ending was kind of a buzzkill, but good story

Not one of my favorite Wokod's works. Not much of the actual growthexpansion or actual involvement, great themes though!

Basically just a bystander's viewpoint of And the next morning she looked like this kind of stuff. Mostly well written and good characterization but very little of what this site is for. 

I will say that I thoroughly enjoyed the story and the theming.  I do wish there was more depth and description to some of the scenes especially towards the end, but that didn't take away from it too much.

only read a half but absolutely amazing, cant wait for the rest