The covid lockdown was tough on Claire. Her only means of reliving stress through baking; she quickly
runs out of supplies. Luckily for her there she finds a new inexpensive, organic brand of flour for her cookies online. However, she should really check her email more often.
Thank you for reading and constructive criticism is always welcome.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 5.00
- BE: 4.00
- Characters: 4.50
- Technical: 4.00
Me
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Guy Incognito
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 3
I really liked this chapter, the story so far has been really good. I do have to say, I would definitely go through and check your grammar again before posting the next chapter there were quite a few errors to the point it was almost hard to understand at times.
wildcard
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 3
The story was an enjoyable read, eager to see the next chapter.
Torque
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Awesome start! I hope the flour enhances him too. I love it when there's side effects he grows and cums more, feeding her and making her grow, maybe leading to her lactating and making him grow again too.
Great start!
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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