My first RE-upload! ^^; Sorry the first file was locked. Here's the unlocked version.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 3.80
- BE: 4.00
- Characters: 4.40
- Technical: 4.60
Mira
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Was a good and enjoyable read, was hoping Bertha would get together with Brandy though still enjoyed the read either way. Also like another person said, should not have the multiple tag as there are no multiple breasts in it.
joe375
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Why'd you use the Multiple tag?
blank
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
a good first shot. bit short, needed more clarification on characters and setting. ie character emotions and location of events.
Mr Popo
Overall= 3, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Good job for your first upload. Keep writing more stories.
I'd love to see some ff BE.
Bad Irving
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Excellent writing and a fun read. A in my book. Please write more!
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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