The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Lord Tempo
JOB REQUIREMENTS
A young woman named Jess works as a secretary for an adult film studio that specializes in big bust films.
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 maybeenuf4u
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5 
I didnt see any errors, this was a great story! Original for this web site, imo.
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Overall= 3, BE= 1, Characters= 3, Technical= 4 
It only barely qualifies as a BE story since there's only once instance of it and it roughly equates to and they grew to this size. There's nothing really of the theme in here save for a couple sentences.
 OdysseusII
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 2, Technical= 4 
Not a big fan of the turning a lesbian straight type stuff
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