A Story of a guy who hates his coworker only to discover she's really his super hero sex fantasy in disguise.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.50
- BE: 4.67
- Characters: 4.83
- Technical: 4.67
tiberianius
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Love the style, not much character development yet, but you have the beginnings of an amazing world
Anon
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Roid Abuser
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Holy fuck this is a good start. Right up my ally.
vicious
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Loving it so far! Wish there was more already. Please keep it up!
just a reader
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Please continue.
Liked the buildup, but after they met the story felt a bit rushed.
deus
Overall= 3, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Pretty good, but I wish it was longer. Looking forward to more!
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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