Rising idol Little Miss Mindy is a growing sensation, literally! Fans come see the shortstack beauty for her awe inspiring form, and stay for her musical talent. This story is quite short, but I hope people enjoy!
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.00
- BE: 4.00
- Characters: 5.00
- Technical: 2.00
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Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 2
I really liked the premise and the characters. However, there were a number of typos throughout that somewhat spoilt the enjoyment for me as it interrupted the flow of the reading.
Nevertheless, I really think it has promise and I hope the author will write a continuation.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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