Polly doesn't like having big breasts. HellMart can probably help her.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.89
- BE: 4.67
- Characters: 4.89
- Technical: 4.56
love the thief sister
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
perfect, absolutely love breast theft story. The sister should have stopped at huge tho.
Opailopai
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Wokod, you're too hard on yourself for writing english as a second language. You've got some great ideas and play nicely with reality warping magic as a premise. Keep it up. These hell mart stories have a nice horny tales from the crypt vibe to them that feels different from the usual be careful what you wish for fare.
Chuckster
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Wonderful story. I wish you'd stop kicking yourself for not being perfect in speaking English. You are better at writing in English than most Americans.
JohnDoe194
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
another great story from you. The only thing I didn't like that was that towards the end, when Polly had the magic wand, everything went very quickly, something was missing.
amazing
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Amazing would love for Vivian to stop at 32M and enjoy being so huge in the school
Bill arms
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Really enjoyed this story. Keep up the good work.
blank
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
damn good story looking forward to part 2 where the sisters revers again.
Astheriom
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
wolfvahn
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
I enjoyed this a great deal! I take it, this was inspired from your work with Wendy and Vanessa on The Dicaphone before others corrupted it? Either way this was really great, kinda wish the girl at the end got something, but it was still really good.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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