Welcome to Madam Materia's Magical Menagerie. Today a begrudged lover wanders into our midst, wishing for an end to the one-sided lifestyle that's developed between her and her partner. Perhaps some big changes will help turn the situation on it's head?
Average Scores:
- Overall: 5.00
- BE: 3.00
- Characters: 5.00
- Technical: 5.00
Didrisse
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Another classic! To be totally honest, I was constantly dreading the moment the pin would drop and things would go awry. I was very glad when it didn't! Overall I enjoyed the story. It was simple and concise, the two main gals played off each other very well and they both seemed incredibly realistic. It would make complete sense for a girl like Jesse to feel burnt out and tired, and I'd like to think it makes sense for a girl like Eve to want to repay that in full when the positions are reversed.
The BE Description is kinda rough because there is no actual growing content, but she does grow and the stages of her growth are explained. There is a good general sense for how big she is, although I'd say there is always room for more description. Technically the writing is up to your usual standard and I was quite amused by the very many different ways you took to naming the girls. I do feel like there possibly could have been more, Jesse waking up in the middle of the night to see changes happening before her eyes, but what is there is good and I highly recommend it. A very sweet and simple story.
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