Xeal was the first succubi to ever do porn.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.67
- BE: 4.17
- Characters: 4.83
- Technical: 4.50
HotSoda
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Brilliant! Fun concept that really deserves to be explored in more detail.
HotSoda
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Brilliant! Fun concept that really deserves to be explored in more detail.
deuxanges
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Liking the plot, it is a refreshing and new idea. Ended a bit too abruptly though. Hoping for a second installment!
cman
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Very fun idea! It could have been fleshed out a bit more. Exploring the idea that the more popular she gets, the more people are interested... so the more popular she gets. I'd definitely be interested in reading about that loss of control and just how ridiculous it would get.
spacemonkeys
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 3
succubus is singular
succubi is plural
Vicious
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Wow! This was really good! A little different than the normal stories I like, but I loved it! Keep going!
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