Two young actresses play a card game that changes their reality in strange and sexy ways.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 2.14
- BE: 3.00
- Characters: 2.71
- Technical: 3.57
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Overall= 2, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
got to admit i was hoping for a bit of 'heart of the cards' to make thinks sort of OK at least but you stuck to it and kept it a tragedy... shame not a lot of people are looking for tragedy in their fictional sex life, got plenty of that in the real world
Unlucky Shoe
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
Prehighschool girls are not sexy.
Bitcoinette
Overall= 1, BE= 3, Characters= 2, Technical= 4
While technically fine, this story left a sour taste in my mouth. It also pushes dangerously close to nonconsent with a technical minor. There is a place for this type of writing, I'm just not sure that a breast expansion site is it.
nonnymouse
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 2, Technical= 3
This was just.... depressing. It didnt turn me on, it just made me sad. One of the characters is also turned underage by one of the transformations, which made me really uncomfortable to keep reading.
DarkHeart
Overall= 1, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
I'm really tired of stories just completely erasing a character's personality. While well written this seemed like some sort of emotional torture porn for no apparent reason.
burningfield
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
Really interesting game. I read Wokod's Life game and morpheus A game to change your life. I love such a board game idea like this. I prefer to see heroin to become much superier being without emptyhead. Like 10ft muscle giantess builder or so. Can I read more your work?
Anon
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Really enjoyed the take on the classic game gone wrong story.
Hope to see more from you in the future.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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