The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Fidget
Master PC: The Coffeeshop
A lonely girl uses Master PC for flirty fun at a coffeeshop.
Average Scores:
 MrEcks
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5 
Great stuff. Add in some sex scenes next time.
 Giggli
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5 
Very funny, while also very hot. A difficult combination to pull off. Great work.
 Willow Tindersmith
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5 
This is exactly the kind of story I wanted to see more of on this site. Bill Pratt has always been one of my favorite authors on here, and this follows in his footsteps very well.
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