A spa, a few women, and a wish to make fun of a flat girl...
Average Scores:
- Overall: 5.00
- BE: 4.60
- Characters: 4.60
- Technical: 4.40
burningfield
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
PLEASE WRITE GTS GROWTH STORY AGAIN
Rakki
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Love your work! Would love to see more of it!
The Martian
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Fantastic story and a unique point of view as well. Attribute theft is a favorite, especially where the loss is deserved. The growth being, at least partially, out of the character's control is also very interesting and part of me would like to see some of the offstage scenes included from Dawn's perspective, but that would probably ruin the ending so it's probably better left as it is. All in all an excellent story. Looking forward to your next work!
XXX
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
absolutely amazing!!!!
Please make more!!!
yoji
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Hey this was pretty good!
I love the attribute theft idea and would totally love to see more of it!
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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