The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Titmage
Your Average Fairytale
A valiant knight goes to fight a dragon to rescue a princess...' assets. Maybe you shouldn't read this one to your kid.
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 Ninja In The Night
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 4 
A decent read. You could have gone a bit better with the actual description of the transformation.
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