A Madam Materia Commission. The world has changed a lot, with the advent of lab grown meat having taken off, hopes for a greener world are looking to be a reality. Just one more thing to find a solution for: milk. Follow Nora, as financial troubles start her down the path of becoming Humane Production's answer to the problem. A Milk Girl.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.25
- BE: 4.00
- Characters: 4.50
- Technical: 4.75
Sobtac
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Fun, short, engaging. Light on plot twists but does exactly what it promises
wildcards
Overall= 3, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
I like nearly all your stories, the writing style and quality makes them easy to read and follow. And I can be rather picky about this.
While reading this nicely told story, that unfold at a slow pace, I could not help to wonder when the 'exciting' stuff was going to happen.
Even though BE took place, it didn't do so according to your other reading material out there, this left me finishing the story, still waiting for the exciting part to happen, so it was lacking a bit of enjoyment for me.
Anyways, eager to read your next produced story shared here.
Someguy
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
I enjoyed it, though personally I'd like to have seen more about the two of them finding her new boobs hot
ktc
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I've read all your stories, and usually they are much meaner than my tastes but I don't think I've ever downrated them just because I don't like them personally. I'm a bland dude with predictable patterns frankly I loved this story. Just a cute BE romp. I kept expecting something terrible or for the guy to get cucked as is so common in your writings but nope just a shortnsweet this time. Thanks for the free story
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