Lulu explores her body's changes and learns that she has some control over her incredibly sensitive figure. Includes chapters 1 and 2 in the same document. This chapter is a bit more plot-heavy in the second half, but gets right to the point at the beginning. Open to suggestions for the next chapters.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.33
- BE: 4.00
- Characters: 4.33
- Technical: 4.67
Humbleoats
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Love it! Cant wait for chapter 3!
tkr
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Fantastic. Please go on! And even more detailled description of the growth, please
Missing chapter
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Chapter 1 reposted, no chapter 2.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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