Ispin Fada is a lonely farmer in the wilds. A mysterious girl may be the answer to his problems. Send feedback to treehunter1@zoho.com. Hope you like it.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.00
- BE: 3.00
- Characters: 5.00
- Technical: 5.00
Hungryhobo
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I must say the vocabulary was well used in this story. the pacing was perfect and the climax no pun intended was satisfying. I would love to see more stories from you.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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