After a stressful day at work, Jessica returns home to find her roommate gone for the weekend. With the apartment to herself, she decides to have a little "fun" with a lactation supplement. It doesn't take long for things to get out of hand, though.
Note: There's really not much plot as this was mostly just a pet project to see how far I could take a breast expansion sequence before losing interest.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.71
- BE: 4.57
- Characters: 4.86
- Technical: 4.71
Snigs
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Incredibly well done. The character's reactions to everything were very well done and incredibly enjoyable. Keep up the good work!
Guy
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
whoa, this looks incredibly good for a pet project. consider doing more writing... like seriously consider it
Bubs
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I usually don't like it when breast expansion that doesn't come from magic violates the law of conservation of mass EG the boobs get really big really quickly with the breast mass coming from nowhere, but that aside I enjoyed this one. I thought the shirt with the buttons was a fun little personality quirk of hers. I also liked the descriptions of how she reacted to the increased breast mass weighing her down.
Stink
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
ThatGuy
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Great story. I'd love to see more of your work.
WaywardTroper
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
There is a nice variety in both description of the size and reaction to the size. The transition to a realistic size and rate of growth to a more outrageous scale is handled well, although there is a clear escalation of pace in the later half as well. It ends on a cute note, and feels relatively grounded despite ending with milk filled breasts large enough to sleep on, and then some. Lactation is always appreciated, and the imagery tied to both that and the feel, weight, and sensation of the boobs is well written. For a first time effort, this is well done, even if the protagonist and the exact rate of process aren't my personal favorite takes on the subject. Kudos, and continue the good work!
cman
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Really fun! I'm glad you took on this pet project.
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