The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Titmage
Growth Therapy
A breast expansion story about a girl trying to deal with her nervousness.
Average Scores:
 Lothar
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5 
This story was fun and needs a sequel. We need to know what Bailey and Aria can do next. 
 Techs
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5 
Cute!
 Guy
Overall= 3, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5 
Not bad, but you back end the expansion and fill much of the space with character stuff. Some people might enjoy it, but its not really my style. Writing is solid though, even if you might want to take more time on working on the expansion portion
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