The exciting conclusion to Out of Control!
Average Scores:
- Overall: 2.67
- BE: 5.00
- Characters: 3.00
- Technical: 4.67
Aylamb
Overall= 1, BE= 5, Characters= 1, Technical= 5
As a standalone story I'd give this a much higher rating, but coming off of Part 1, which was sweet and excellent across the board this just fell flat on its face.
I'll freely admit that the NC tag isn't my jam, but it was handled with so much fun in part 1 that the swerve into crueltya 180 heel turn for a fairly interesting character speaking within the genrejust feels like a kick in the teeth.
Ultimately a wasted sequel to a wellbuilt set up.
manDDa
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Both parts were cute.
I absolutely LOVE the darkness of the second part.
JohnT09
Overall= 2, BE= 5, Characters= 3, Technical= 5
That got unexpectedly dark.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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