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The Overflowing Bra

BEengineer
Commission - Milk Magic Part 1
A fine commission from one of my patrons! Part 2 to come in the future hopefully.

A girl finds she has a wonderful talent for the art of milk magic and is whisked away to a school of similar individuals. The dairy flowing within her breasts isn't all it seems, however.
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look
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
nice work
Apple
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Simply amazing. Can't wait for a part 2.
Walschboy
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Damn! When I read a BE story, I usually put it in one of 3 categories based on how it made me feel. Few stories pull me into this top category, but this story made me literally SHIVER in excitement. That is how you know this will be good.
554.55 I still want to see more of the characters but they are all fun so far.
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