Weary from exploring the wilderness of Dymmir, Gwen (A shy bookworm transformed into a chubby amazon with some serious curves) stops at an inn in the city of Wahnkara. What begins as a chance encounter with a local serving girl, quickly turns into a passionately expansive experience that teaches Gwen more about her new powers.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 5.00
- BE: 5.00
- Characters: 5.00
- Technical: 3.00
Anon
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 3
Technically, spelling could use more proofreading, but this did nothing to distract from the overall quality here. I enjoyed it and want more!
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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