A Madam Materia commission. Sequel to A Night Out, Lessien Viris gives Madam Materia's Magical Menagerie a visit, under the pretense of getting a little payback. The desire is mutual, as once more these lascivious, lying ladies have themselves a little competition to try and turn the other into the object of their fantasies. It would seem both of them have some tricks up their sleeves however to take this round of their game to a new level.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.00
- BE: 4.33
- Characters: 4.17
- Technical: 4.00
Modan
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Great story, thanks Materia
Kal
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
I greatly enjoyed the story, and not just because I'm a fan of the characters. She's a good writer overall, and this story and the one before really show how flexible she can be in describing the various transformations.
Nobody
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I like the part where I clicked 5 4 times and got to write words about words.
First time reviewer
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
A surprising character piece with a nice side order of BE, and other transformation. Best enjoyed if your going into it to unironically read it for the plot.
The additional file formats are nice as well.
Amoonamous
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Not sure what the other guy is talking about. This was a fun read
A Madam Materia Reviewer
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
A Madam Materia review. Subpar in comparison to other Madam Materia content in Madam Materia stories by Madam Materia.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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